Critique Service

If you are looking for some feedback on your picture book text, look no further! As a published author, I can offer valuable feedback on your writing, your characters and your story premise.

The way you wrote my feedback was so supportive. It had just enough straightforwardness to show me which bits needed looking at, but at the same time you were complimentary and your tone was helpful/positive (rather than really overtly critical). Thank you so much.” A.B.

Please note: I specialise in picture books (3-7years) and as such, am offering critiques of this genre only at this time.

Critique rate: £50 per manuscript

Payment: Payment should be via paypal to or please email for Fund Transfer details.

Timescale: You can expect your critique within 1-2 weeks of receipt of payment

Please email with any questions. I look forward to hearing from you and reading your stories!

In the meantime, you’ll find lots of helpful advice on the Internet; PictureBookDen is a great place to start.